torsdag 13. juni 2013

13.06.2013 aka SCAAAANS

Major Sketchdump yo!





























5 kommentarer:

  1. I love pencil work so much!

    Okay, so one thing that I can see that is being sacrificed is probably the 'overallness' of the images. I would try to think of each page as a sort of complete composition. Like find focal points and then have everything be subservient to them. You start doing this on occasion with some of the pages (for example http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-9S7WHeouimk/UbqXKcoszoI/AAAAAAAACG8/L-fIZXFBhbc/s1600/19+001.jpg). The shadow behind the character on the left pulls your eye in that direction.
    I'm just trying to help you think about the overall composition -- even in sketches -- can make these appear as finalized pieces in their own right.
    Other than that a more consistent value scheme would help to really give these pages that extra *POP*.

    No matter what I say though, these are all really kick ass regardless. I tend to love the sketches that people pump out more than the finalized pieces for the most part. Keep up the good work!

    SvarSlett